The Sunset is Different Here
Photo by Me. 2/5/26

The sunset is different here

It makes me feel like I am lost

Maybe that is the point

Like a North Star pointing me to forget all that I lost

This quiet grief becoming a familiar face

Another sunset too soon

My heart searching for the long summer days

Change your environment, change your life

Finding myself in this foreign place

I miss back home but even that seems different

The longer I am away nothing is the same

A stranger in the wind on the way to a destination unknown

All that I have known stripped away

Like flesh from bone

Dare I lift my eyes to see another grey sky

God help me, show me the reason why

I keep thinking of King David in the scriptures

“ I had fainted unless, I believed to see the goodness of the Lord, in the land of the living!”

My sense of security resides in but mere hopeful wishes

Prayers to the sky, the orange light fading on me

Dare I ask to see the sunrise, don’t let my dreams die

Forgive my weak faith a heart torn

by expected disappointments

I clutch my heart as my eyes scan for a hint of gold

Oh to have a glorious sunrise upon this valley

Cast away this darkness that clings to my soul

The sunset is different here and yet another chapter unfolds

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6 responses to “The Sunset is Different Here”

    1. ShilohRose77 Avatar

      Thank you my sweet friend!

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  1. vermavkv Avatar

    This is deeply moving and beautifully written. The way you weave imagery of the sunset with longing, faith, and displacement creates such a vivid emotional landscape that the reader can almost feel the cool air and see that fading orange light beside you. Your lines carry a quiet ache, yet they’re threaded with hope—the kind that trembles but refuses to disappear

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    1. ShilohRose77 Avatar

      Thank you so much, your words are so encouraging!

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  2. Mez Avatar

    Your writing is so beautiful- takes the reader in and so easy to picture the landscape you are describing. The emotion comes through and the longing for better times, fueled by the hope that you have.

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    1. ShilohRose77 Avatar

      I’m so glad you see my heart!

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